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Gushhh....... In two words boring and lenghty

This was really beautiful and poetic. But it would make more waves as a narrative poem

Intresting story it was i like the story line it was good. But it was definitely not a script for sure. For proper script formating PM and one other thing ...

I loved it. It states question that could actually get one thinking. But the title doesn't fit its not attractive. Change it to something like "realities" or "facts". Every other ...

Your plot is a nice one just you didn't get the right words to express and try to make it clear with few words next time. Its a poem not ...

A beautiful expression of the heart, I love it. The words of line 1 stanza 1 which also reapeted in the last stanza was too cold for the poem find ...

You did a great job especially with d part below.... With a sad, sweet face And kiss me gently My heart starts to race ....The rythm between face and race ...

Good poem you are creative A BREATH WITHOUT A LIFE Melvin Banggollay We need to breath to live, to see the birds fly To feel the wind as it leaves. ...

Why am I sad Is it because am mad Or because I make my enemy glad Though I know its hard But I shall not become bad Cause if I ...

Keep the rythm flowing it was beautiful its what seprates poetry from an emotional writer and i say you are a POET

Am in love the whole story it was straight and clear. In stanza the rythm was beautiful. But the abrupt end to it at the middle of the stanza made ...

You did well i enjoy your rythm. But throughout the poem you got me confused are you blind in eyes literally or emotionally. Try to make it clear next time, ...

Your story is beautiful but ur first 2 line of stanza 2 should have conluded stanza 1 so the sad side of the stori would just start there. keep it ...

Am not much of a poet but i think you did a great job with your story making it a poem. But i must add that your words at the ...

I look as the sky roars with joy, my heart pounds, my senses telling me "you won't make it to the next minute" and then suddenly I look towards where ...